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Wings Of Ice
Wings of Ice

Another layer of frost maims
I'll become one with this eternal winter
A triumph over the the flow of time is mine to claim

My past and future will be torn asunder
And I will freeze the pain in my veins
Never again will I be forced to surrender

My glacier
Shatter all that destroyed me
My blizzard
Blot out society's cruel morality
-
I am but a mirror
A reflection of your sins
I am the terror
Let my revenge begin

I'll show you the face
That you made me create

I'll enjoy your screams
Knowing they're not a dream

Your tears will become icicles
Because to let you cry is hypocritical

You are the corruption that fell
Shadow Sun
Shadow Sun

And in that very moment, I knew it was already too late
My   vision   has   adjusted
The memories of my former life all just slipped away
My   light   has   faded

The last of the fallen sparks fluttered in the distance
My   hope   has   been   obliterated
The shadows rose to claim their long awaited radiance
My   destiny   was    always   fated
-
In my heart, I lost it all
To this very second, it's still my fa
Shade Of Blue
Shade Of Blue

From a deep slumber...
I have awoken
To this cruel color...
That leaves me haunted

My eyes scream
As I opened the door to my soul
Those thoughts of you start to bleed
Reminding me that you're just a person I used to know
-
A dark ocean blue that I once knew
Leaked through my window
It matched this mood
Amplifying the sorrow

Sparking negative energy
It's the secret source of my core
The only element allowing me-
To survive another day, once more

Without a care
I can endure
Without a prayer
I push forward

So let this hue shower
With extreme hatred
Force the nostalgia to devour
And let my heart remain powerless
-
Wishing I was
My Invisible Life
My Invisible Life

Chest piercing
Pulse bounding
Barely breathing

I'm praying
On the surface of anxiety

I'm weeping
Getting used to this melancholy
-
They said...
They said...
They said...
They'd always be here to help

But instead...
But instead...
But instead...
I've always only had myself

I regret...
I regret...
I regret...
Opening the gates to this hell

It spreads...
It spreads...
It spreads...
And the screams are revealed

Tears shed...
Tears shed...
Tears shed...
I let my sorrow and resolve meld
-
Sight fading
Body numbing
Emotions withering

My desires are overtaken
I know this isn't right

But my lies weren't convincing
So this wi
An Oath to My FatherAn Oath to My Father:

The chill of winter is nothing, when compared to the cold inside my heart.

A fire, once stoked by the warmth of family, has quietly died, five falls past.

I dream of my father, who watches from beyond the realms - and my ancestors

Who fought against an endless army of giants, to win the lands we have today.

Just as a devout man honours his God through worship, I honour them through my axe!

Each stroke of the whetstone, each screech of the metal, brings me closer to them -

Even as I draw closer to my doom. Oh how I can feel him, for the anger in my blood

Boils evermore as I sense him approaching my camp. He is hun
TearsFeel the rain dripping on your face
Sitting somewhere in an unknown place
You might just had your heart broken
Those feelings of yours go unspoken

Let the rain wash your pain away
Let it wash away and find your way
Let the rain slowly heal your wounds
It heals your heart and will hide your wounds

The rain will stay with you for years
It's one of those things that always cares
Because in the rain nobody will see your tears
Dream Eater"Dream Eater"

Why can't I awake this time?
I keep watching someone die every night
I can't even tell if I am alive
Have I finally lost what's left of my mind?

I can feel something envelop me
Breaking my skin; I'm letting it free
But looking at my reflection this time
The face looking back isn't mine!

I find its getting harder to relate
I keep watching someone make the same mistakes
I feel like any moment I will break
Watching scenes that seem so fake

Like a broken record spinning in circles
I can't seem to get over these hurdles
But the scenes I'm watching; I'm not to blame
This really is a sadistic game

I'm trapped in a nev
Wings Of Fire
Wings Of Fire

Damages have been reversed
I have many flaws to be purged
Tempted for the gift of death to end this living curse

I plead for you to pass the torch
Hand over the destiny I've been waiting for
I can no longer endure this unbearable dirge

My pyre-
Send me off to the fiery abyss
My ignitor-
Free me from life's grip
-
Weep not for past sins
Leave behind those memories
Weep not for scarred skin
Forgive those memorable tragedies

Let go of that darkness within
Grasp onto serenity
Lift up the veil for the ending
Hold onto clarity

There's peace within pain
Calm can engulf the chaos
There's love behind the hate
Freedom can mask the gr
Dreaming Of Tears
Dreaming Of Tears

Weary-eyed
Weakened to the very core
Traumatized
I can't endure this anymore

I'm going to black out
And be transported to a realm
Where my screams don't make a sound
Hate keeps me bound while I leave my fears to drown
-
I loath the days without rest
I despise the nights of endless stress

Though I can't settle for anything less
Because lower than this is death

It's like living and sleeping within tortuous realities
Even though I'm unconscious- there is no such thing as rest for me

No one knows how powerful my dreams can be
No one knows all of the graphic images I've seen

Dive into the ocean! / Swim through the thorns!
L
I Comfort MyselfWith a warm drink, whispering secrets to my own reflection.

The struggles that plague me, though none may know,

Are only for the ears of my quiet mirror, who smiles

Softly, warmly and with care. He tells me, I'm fine

I've done well for now and soon I may finally rest.

Though the silence continues to press upon me,

Weighing upon my soul like an iron crate.

Still I find comfort in whispering secrets,

If only to my own reflection - holding a warm drink...

-Chen Yuan Wen, 17th October 2012
SinkingRecently I've been sinking
Like a stone into a pond
Having skimmed across the surface
Of life for far too long

Please may I have a new heart
Along with a new mind
I cannot reverse this feeling
No, I'm sorry, not this time

Recently I've been sinking
Into myself like quicksand
No one sees as it swallows me
Each grain a mislaid plan

Please may I crawl inside your love
Mingle hearts until the end
I cannot reverse this feeling
No, I'm sorry, not again

Recently I've been sinking
Such an overused metaphor
But one which is cathartic
When choosing to explore

That I could save you my love
And in time you could save me
As fear and
Where Angels PlayWhere Angels Play:

A lonely spark appears before me tonight
amongst the struggles deep inside of me...
Should I give in, will I breathe in?

How much more can I be forced to take
before my soul breaks?
Shards crashing into me
letting me know I am alive
If only
I am barely breathing...

The moon lights my pathway
deep in dark, where we will fade
I've walked past the archway
Where angels will play...

The warmest touch, upon my skin
Wings that glow with sacred light, from deep within
They have come to take me back, to where I've been
Gone away into the winds, my voice forever lingering

Do I alone escape this and find my peace
wi
Mirror, Mirror"Mirror, Mirror"

When she looks in the mirror, what is it that she sees?

A reflection of exotic and exquisite beauty?

Do not be hard on yourself dear, images can deceive

You are more beautiful than a picture can perceive

Photographs don't do justice to those who judge

So quick to be critical are the minds that don't budge

Close-minded and ignorant are those proud of themselves

Alone they are on the inside like closets without shelves

The most lonely of the bunch are the ones with pretty faces

Who are never just satisfied with crushing hearts in various places

Their minds are destroyed as they become more and more blind

Confused an
Rain Of Darkness
Rain Of Darkness

Something inside me broke
The core of my soul snapped
That is when I felt this numbing cold
I blinked, and everything started to fade to black

When you left me alone
I felt this eternal betrayal
When you finally let me go
The pain inside me became unstable

The weight on my shoulders collapsed
While the world I knew faded
As the remorse relapsed
I'm consumed by hatred
-
Thou have forsaken
So the rest shall witness my conviction

My hope was taken
But was replaced by affliction

You knew what would happen
When you took back your salvation

Why am I the one abandoned?
I didn't take -ANYTHING!- for granted

Rev
Fate SoundLocked up where it's said it's safe
I hear the sounds outside.
The cries of authority as they chase
down those that forgot to hide.
Reality settles in deep and it frightens
those less fortunate souls that cried
out to be heard, to seek help to enlighten
but the impatient world has died.

No longer does it breathe united,
its falling to its end
Where the final prayers have been recited
to the wounds that they can't mend.
Lost in chaos we will stand
behind the shadows of a forgotten land
where maybe love was possible...
without the doting reprimand.
Hearts have grown too hostile
and it is something we can't see
until we step ba
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S. Note

Dear mother, dear father
Dear brother, dear sister

Don't worry, you still have each other
And without me you're all so much stronger
Leave me behind and let me go, I promise the days will get brighter

Dear teachers, dear counselors
Dear therapists, dear doctors

You have my gratitude for what you all did
But I hit rock bottom too many times, and this last one was it
The end of the road again, as if no one could have kept me from a coffin
-
I was not fit to live life
I failed at everything, every time
I sincerely did my very best, I really tried
I just could no longer stand feeling so powerless inside

I lay wide awake ev
Frozen Whirlpool
Frozen Whirlpool

Somewhere...in the ocean
There is a whirlpool...that is...frozen
-
I no longer had anything keeping me bound to this world
You were my love, you were my chain, and my heart was a link
And I couldn't bear the thought of never seeing your face anymore
So my knees gave, as I let my thoughts break, and I forced myself to sink
-
Somewhere...in the darkness
There is a soul...which became faithless
-
All those memories down the drain
I feel the bitterness of hope
While my tears rain
I cannot cope
-
Somewhere...in the depths
There is a spark...cradled by emptiness
-
My pain will always remain in time
As I never w
Dear My Guardian Angel
Dear My Guardian Angel

I was born with an invisible noose, and as I got older it got tighter
I kept looking for the perfect opportunity to drop, it's either now or never

Dear Heaven / Dear Hell / I am my own executioner!
-
Every night, I lay awake, starring down a loaded barrel of a gun
Aimed at my tempting skull, and the trigger is ready to go off

Dear God / Dear Lucifer / I am not that promising child I once was!
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That corruption coursed through, and took over, it's too late already

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Wings Of Light

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Wings Of Light

Upon me is the last dawn
Faded away has the last dusk
I leave behind all of the rights and wrongs
I don't deserve an afterlife that is also rough

Mesmerized in deep suspense
As I await the final arrival
My tears become so intense
These last moments of hope are vital

My bearer
Allow me to break away
My deliverer
Accept the toll of my undying faith
-
I was careless as I fell
Mocking life itself

Every secret I held
Defined a broken side of myself

An inner slaughter I could not defend
A one-sided war that I could not fight against

My downfall is what I didn't want to prevent
I always lusted after the idea of my final descent

Because I knew that in the end I would ascend
All I can really do is live this divided life as best as I can

I realized that the only thing in perfection is being broken
And the only way to get rid of that is to wipe out my existence
-
Shine down and shine true
I will no longer be powerless
You don't know how long I've been waiting for you
I will no longer be a figment that remains in this darkness

In this light I am still blind
Just like in my life that was dark
But night turned to day, and it's so bright
A respark in the heart, I'm now fearless as I walk

My messenger
Whiteout the fragments of my past
My redeemer
Wipe these tears with your forgiving hands

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My creator
Take back the life you gave to me
My destroyer
Make the ruins that were meant to be
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©2012-2013 *ImmortalizedLies
Category: Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

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Mood: Love ~ParamoreFreak07 Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O. M. G. <3
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Mood: Joy *ImmortalizedLies Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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Mood: Love ~midna27 Oct 19, 2012  Student Artist
wow... thats awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mood: Joy *ImmortalizedLies Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheh, I'm happy that you liked it. <3
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~midna27 Oct 28, 2012  Student Artist
your welcome. i suuuccckkk at peotry.
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~Taofizzle Oct 19, 2012
This is amazing!!! love the poem and the art. I would appreciate it if you could explain what you meant by"I realized that the only thing in perfection is being broken" I don't understand because perfection and broken are like opposites.
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*ImmortalizedLies Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your insightful and delighted comment, it's much appreciated. I guess I have to answer your question since it seems many others will as well.

The perfection of being broken.....well, to be honest, it's just a random metaphor I made up in my mind while I was writing it. You see, the character who is speaking in the poem has had their point of view altered by life. The perfection definition is switched, to look at something that is completely broken, it is "perfectly" broken.
For someone, or something to have a flaw, and there is no way to fix that flaw, in a sense it is "perfectly" flawed.
It's just a fictional point of view, I'm not trying to make something out of nothing :P
Did that make sense and answer your question? Please let me know! :D
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~Taofizzle Oct 19, 2012
Yeah you did, really appreciate that you took the time to explain it to me. Wish I could write poems like that, I find it amazing how much you express the emotions of the character speaking. Again stunning art and genius poem!!!
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