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Wings Of Light

Upon me is the last dawn
Faded away has the last dusk
I leave behind all of the rights and wrongs
I don't deserve an afterlife that is also rough

Mesmerized in deep suspense
As I await the final arrival
My tears become so intense
These last moments of hope are vital

My bearer
Allow me to break away
My deliverer
Accept the toll of my undying faith

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I was careless as I fell
Mocking life itself

Every secret I held
Defined a broken side of myself

An inner slaughter I could not defend
A one-sided war that I could not fight against

My downfall is what I didn't want to prevent
I always lusted after the idea of my final descent

Because I knew that in the end I would ascend
All I can really do is live this divided life as best as I can

I realized that the only thing in perfection is being broken
And the only way to get rid of that is to wipe out my existence

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Shine down and shine true
I will no longer be powerless
You don't know how long I've been waiting for you
I will no longer be a figment that remains in this darkness

In this light I am still blind
Just like in my life that was dark
But night turned to day, and it's so bright
A respark in the heart, I'm now fearless as I walk

My messenger
Whiteout the fragments of my past
My redeemer
Wipe these tears with your forgiving hands
My creator
Take back the life you gave to me
My destroyer
Make the ruins that were meant to be
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This poem is written for my project, titled- "The Prodigy's Suicide"
Check out the other "Wing" Poems below if you liked this one.

Volume nine: Wings Of Nobody

Wings Of Darkness - [link]
Wings Of Fire - [link]
Wings Of Light -
Wings Of Ice - Not Yet Written
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ParamoreFreak07 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O. M. G. <3
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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midna27 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Artist
wow... thats awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheh, I'm happy that you liked it. <3
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midna27 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student Artist
your welcome. i suuuccckkk at peotry.
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Taofizzle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
This is amazing!!! love the poem and the art. I would appreciate it if you could explain what you meant by"I realized that the only thing in perfection is being broken" I don't understand because perfection and broken are like opposites.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your insightful and delighted comment, it's much appreciated. I guess I have to answer your question since it seems many others will as well.

The perfection of being broken.....well, to be honest, it's just a random metaphor I made up in my mind while I was writing it. You see, the character who is speaking in the poem has had their point of view altered by life. The perfection definition is switched, to look at something that is completely broken, it is "perfectly" broken.
For someone, or something to have a flaw, and there is no way to fix that flaw, in a sense it is "perfectly" flawed.
It's just a fictional point of view, I'm not trying to make something out of nothing :P
Did that make sense and answer your question? Please let me know! :D
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Taofizzle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Yeah you did, really appreciate that you took the time to explain it to me. Wish I could write poems like that, I find it amazing how much you express the emotions of the character speaking. Again stunning art and genius poem!!!
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