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Wings Of Ice

My avenger:
Lay down my enemies painfully
My vindicator:
Release all the hatred heartlessly

Another layer of frost maimed
I've become one with this eternal winter
I've stopped the flow of time in this one frame

My past and future have been torn asunder
I've frozen the pain within my veins
Never again will I ever have to surrender
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I am but a reflection
Of every aimless sin
A casualty of corruption
So let my thoughts of vengeance unhinge

I'll reveal the face-
That you forced me to create

I'll indulge in the screams-
Knowing it's not a dream

Tears will instantly become icicles-
Allowing the scum of the Earth to cry is hypocritical

You're the taint that fell from grace-
You don't even deserve these snowy graves

You were all too careless
Always hurting those around you
Now accept the consequences
For the damages you cannot undo
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None have survived
The vortex of truth
Their lies are immortalized in ice

Their silencing was self-induced
Justice has been redefined
After my storm ripped through

My glacier:
Crush all that destroyed me
My blizzard:
Mirror society's cruel morality
In the wake of winter's sorrow
I will freeze the hatred of tomorrow
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This poem is written for my project, titled-
"The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume nine: The Wings Of Nobody

Wings Of Ice -
Wings Of Fire - [link]
Wings Of Light - [link]
Wings Of Darkness - [link]

This completes volume nine.
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RufusMisser Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
incredible!!!Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle 
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
I'm glad you liked this one.
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Koyira Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is truly beautiful, amazing :clap:
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:iconimmortalizedlies:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I'm very glad that you liked it. :D
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DaffyDaftnezz Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very Beautiful Drawing (love The color), and the poem is really Great :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
I'm happy that you enjoyed all I had to offer with this deviation. I try and only upload the very best outcomes of my abilities.

:D
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rainbowvortex Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
fantastic!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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xCritical1337 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Impressive.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Katlyon Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Agreeing with the others that say this is musical sounding--I read it in my head like a Sonata Arctica song, I like your style.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm heavily influenced by music. So I'm glad it shows.
And thank you for mentioning that band's name. I checked them out on youtube, and the first song I listened to was "I have a right"

Now I'm going to check out there other songs because I simply fell in love instantly with them! XD

I'm glad you liked it. I hope you stay tuned for more poems!
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Charming-Dimentia Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really really fantastic. I was chilled to the bone while reading this. Excellent work. You really know how to use your imagery! : D
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!!
I'm so happy that you enjoyed this piece. It means a lot.
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The-Archaeon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Are you making any of these into music? They have a musical quality to them, maybe that's why I like them so much as well :)

And I can assume yes from all the microphones in the pictures xD
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I wish I could. I have no musical talent what-so-ever.
I'm influenced by music heavily. So I'm glad it shows through.
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The-Archaeon Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I see, my bad haha!
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RPbogal Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like ur poem, I thought it was really good :D
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, well thank you so much. I'm very glad that you liked it. :D It means a lot.
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RPbogal Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome :D
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CreativeNight Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like your poem,
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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DemonicRhino Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing picture, fantastical poem, that is all i can say, but i hope i can say more in my actions than i have in my words. I can only favourite, but it feels like i should do more...ILAMA BADGES FOR ALL!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. It took a while to finally be able to finish off the Wings series. :D
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Sy-Core Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012   Writer
I love how you put it all together, very nice poem :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you- that means a lot. :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Sy-Core Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012   Writer
Your welcome :)
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