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Wings Of Fire

My pyre:
Send me off to the fiery abyss
My ignitor:
Free me from life's grip

Morals have been tortured
Strengths have been reversed
Desires have been submersed

I plead for you to pass the torch
Hand over the destiny I've been waiting for
Let me finish off this unbearable dirge
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Weep not for singed sins
Leave behind the memories
Mourn not for scarred skin
Forgive every tragedy

Set ablaze that darkness within
Grasp onto serenity
Fuel the flame for the ending
Cling onto clarity

There's peace after pain
Calm can engulf chaos
There's love behind hate
Freedom masks weakness
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I've abandoned every promise
I couldn't complete what was said
My hope cannot rise from the ashes

Please, do not follow my footprints of flame
They only lead down a path where infernos cascade
There is no honorable life or even death for what I became

My fire:
Consume this cruel reality
My destroyer:
Fade out the world that was not meant for me
Purged by fire
Mortalize my desire
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This poem is written for my project, titled- "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume nine: Wings Of Nobody

Wings Of Light
Wings Of Light
Upon me is the last dawn
Faded away has the last dusk
I leave behind all of the rights and wrongs
I don't deserve an afterlife that is also rough
Mesmerized in deep suspense
As I await the final arrival
My tears become so intense
These last moments of hope are vital
My bearer
Allow me to break away
My deliverer
Accept the toll of my undying faith

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I was careless as I fell
Mocking life itself
Every secret I held
Defined a broken side of myself
An inner slaughter I could not defend
A one-sided war that I could not fight against
My downfall is what I didn't want to prevent
I always lusted after the idea of my final descent
Because I knew that in the end I would ascend
All I can really do is live this divided life as best as I can
I realized that the only thing in perfection is being broken
And the only way to get rid of that is to wipe out my existence
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Shine down and shine true
I will no longer be powerless
You don't know how long I've been waiting for you
I will
  Wings Of Ice
Wings of Ice
Another layer of frost maims
I'll become one with this eternal winter
A triumph over the the flow of time is mine to claim
My past and future will be torn asunder
And I will freeze the pain in my veins
Never again will I be forced to surrender
My glacier
Shatter all that destroyed me
My blizzard
Blot out society's cruel morality

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I am but a mirror
A reflection of your sins
I am the terror
Let my revenge begin
I'll show you the face
That you made me create
I'll enjoy your screams
Knowing they're not a dream
Your tears will become icicles
Because to let you cry is hypocritical
You are the corruption that fell from grace
All of you don't even deserve these snowy graves
You are all too heartless
Always hurting those around you
Now accept the consequences
For the damages you cannot undo
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Another storm ripped through
None have survived
The vortex of truth
An end to the strife
Your silence was self-induced
This frozen sanctuary is now all mine
My avenger
Lay down my f
  Wings Of Darkness
Wings Of Darkness
My warrior:
Bind me within your embrace
My defender:
Bestow me with your grace
I seek your help to obtain the unseen
I need you to blind me from the light
Never let me see my weakness again
Blanket my fears so I won't cry
Cease the false hope from shining in vain
Ward away the lies that hide behind my eyes
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Morph this disaster into a calm night
Burn the dying sun out
Darken the nightmarish sky
Let the ominous clouds melt
Lock away this cursed gift of sight
I no longer desire it
Shut out the world from you and I
I yearn for the abyss
Rip away my self-hatred
Bring back my innocence
Obliterate the life I created
And color this reality obsidian
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Let the void consume
Paint my essence black
Devour what was once called truth
My faith is in your hands
I profess it all unto you
I am under your command
My savior:
Cover up my exiled heart
My protector:
Wrap my soul i

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ColdBlackRaven Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was painful. The italics part killed me inside. It felt relatable :iconheartbreakplz:

Amazing work :clap:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, but I'm sorry it had that effect on you :(
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ColdBlackRaven Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome and no you don't need to be sorry. You did really good :)
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LiliaKatie Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Artist
beautiful
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thank you.
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shuboo Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Writer
That is a very beautiful poem
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you a ton, I'm so happy that you liked this one. :D
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midna27 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Artist
thats a sad poem.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, sad panda is sad :(
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midna27 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Artist
So why did you make this? What was your inspiration?
(Oh gosh I sound like a tv spokesperson)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmmm, well I can only think of one answer to that question, and it's a long one.
I guess what inspired me most is that my brother is a fire fighter, and he's the oldest out of the three of us. He would be gone for weeks at a time, when he would be working on helping fight fires. When he would get home, he would be like, thinner, exhausted, and just different. He would tell me stories of what it was like, all the close calls he had, and others had during that time. One thing that really stuck to me, is that he said his dreams were all to do with fire. That kind of...scared me a bit. He's awake fighting fire, and his asleep, dreaming of fire.

I just kind of used that fear, and trauma, while thinking of the poem I wrote, before this one- Wings Of Darkness- [link]
Combining both the concept, fear, inspiration, trauma, and literature template, I got this "Wings Of Fire" in the end.
Wings Of Darkness is a completely different story though :P

I hope that made sense, and answered your question clearly.
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midna27 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Artist
:) it did make sense.
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Silver4Espeon Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
That's a meaningful work of true art right there.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot when you say it like that. <3
And I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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KavotofFire Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like your poem
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thank you.
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dragonfire341 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMYGOD dude that was awesome i REALLY wish i could write poems that well!!! i am so fricking JEALOUS OF YOUR AWESOMENESS!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, aw, you're too kind to say that.
Thank you a ton, I'm so happy that you really liked this one. I put a lot into this. :)
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dragonfire341 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D yay!! i REALLLY hope you do more!!! oh btw i meant to put three L's in the word really!! :D
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StarryKite Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
It is beautiful, reminds me of Pardon Me song by Incubus. ^-^
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OOOooooo, I'll have to listen to that song now.
But I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. <3
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StarryKite Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
You're always welcome. ^_^
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Fenix-King Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Dude you.....Are .....AWESOME!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thank you a ton. I'm so happy it turned out as expected. <3 I'm glad you liked it.
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FirePrincessAndrea Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow, i have lost words!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Omg moltres!
Lol, thank you, I'm glad you liked it. <3
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FirePrincessAndrea Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
omg moltres??? you looked at my profile did you??
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
maybe :P
^_^
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FirePrincessAndrea Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
maybe??
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Shippuden23 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
This was beauiful. Great job.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot.
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Shippuden23 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
No problem :D
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djfj16 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
interesting grasp on the way things are...
good pic and good poem. :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I tried. :)
So thank you for your kind comment. It really does mean a lot! <3
And I'm so glad you liked everything I had to offer with this piece.
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djfj16 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem. :)
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crities Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
OMG THAT IS AMAZING <3
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
IKR!
Thank you so much, I'm so happy that you enjoyed this. :)
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crities Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
no problem its awesome
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TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very good. One of the best poems I've read in quite a while and of the type that, after reading it again, slightly alters my view on life.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I really had no intention of slightly altering something :P
But I did put a lot of thought into this one, I've been meaning to write it for quite sometime, and I hope this is the best I can do.
So thank you, I'm very happy that you've felt that way about this. :D
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Wolf-Ninja001 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
win and awesome.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thank you so much. I'm relieved that people like this.
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reflectionsinwater Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It has quite a complex perspective, and good use of irony and paradoxes such as acceptance and denial. Wow :O
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
When you put it that way....I guess it is kind of all over the place and back and forth. Hmmmm.
I hope it made sense :P
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shadowthieve7 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist
Totally badass
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thank you, I'm glad you liked this. :D
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shadowthieve7 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist
like I sad it was badass lookin
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