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This Unknown Feeling

It's in this one moment-
That my eyes are truly opened

When the world around me is torn-
My childish heart exiles it's warmth

There are no real words-
To express this level of hurt

My tears want to go berserk-
But the shattered purged
Breathless ever after
Free-falling faster

Everyday masks were trustful
For reasons that seemed hopeful

I yearned for reality to be rendered true
I wanted it to represent what I would never lose

Eyes torn wide / Darkness swallows light
Suddenly side-swiped / Ripped your disguise
Spite grows inside / Stripped my pride
My humanity's demise / Destroyed and deprived

My mind lay in ruins
There's nothing worth holding

Attachments never really last
That realization- I finally grasped

Truth can be the victim of fiction
And trust can quickly be abandoned
It's within any second-
That hope itself can be taken for granted

There's always a source at fault-
Whether a betrayal or a self-inflicting cause

The pieces of my soul will never forget-
What it felt like to almost be whole once again

Now my motivation and inspiration darken-
While I unknown feeling
Everything has been taken away
Except the fear of if it happening again
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This poem is written for my project, titled "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume five: Memories Of Nothing

-This Unknown Feeling- Drowning Out The World
Drowning Out The World

I find myself in the sounds
I release my pain in the lyrics
Enveloping peace is found
The vibes calm my spirit

But when silence falls
Reality and time stop
And then my mind floods
With ever-consuming thoughts
The walls in my head break down
The serenity within goes silent
And every regret cries out
My memories become violent

I get this sensation
That my soul is too damaged

A dreadful realization
There's nothing left of me to salvage

Music is just a distraction
To blind myself from the carnage

I remain behind the destruction
Where darkness has the advantage

Remnants of rhyme hinder
Calling out to me once more
In Between Dreams
In Between Dreams

A fragment of a second
Just   one   slight   glance

You're the only person
That   puts   me   in   a   trance

I feel so close to you
But   I   am   so   far   away

If only you knew
I   felt   this   way
To fully express this feeling
It's like raw torture at heart
Because you live on without knowing
And it makes me desire you even more

A solace night of dreaming
I thought I never would have it
This longing luxury of sleeping
It's what I've always wanted

I thought it was too much to ask for
A sense of rest and relief
I feel as if it's more than I deserve
It's been so long since I had this nightmaric dise
The Coward (I Am) The Hero (Is Damned)
The Coward (I Am) The Hero (Is Damned)

Every choice that I've made always failed / always failed
Every day I looked death in the eyes, and I smiled / I smiled
I guess I just gave up somewhere in the beginning / in the beginning
Piece by piece, I let myself go, I'm slowly breaking / I'm slowly breaking

Taunting my own useless mortality / preaching to the ashen-winged angel
This lifespan of mine is such treachery / the golden doors are too judgmental

My worst enemy is also my own reflection / a war to be unleashed
My only friends are the tears that keep dripping / though they still leave me

Far too long have I been on my life's edge

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Silver-cLaw Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I like the confused, chaotic sort of feeling this poem has.

And I like the part "there are no real words to express..." because it's true that there are some things that just can't be conveyed with any real words.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I completely agree. Sometimes there are just no words that can be said for someone else to understand what's wrong.
Thank you for the kind comment, it is very much appreciated. I apologize for the late response.
LaDarkProphet Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done. Good piece of literature. I enjoyed reading it and hope too see more like it. ^_^
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the confidence.
There's a lot more coming down the road. I just need to make the time to put my mind on paper. :D
LaDarkProphet Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ Good luck and may your writing flow well.
Master-Zach Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
hey this is really good!! even though it makes me feel sad its still very well written and I love how you did the text.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the kind comment. This particular one went through a bunch of changes. When I first wrote it- it was starting off being on top of the world, and then the middle was being torn down, and the end was the unknown result...but it was too much of a rushed feeling to it. I ended up with just concentrating on the end result of the "unknown feeling" It's pretty complex now that I really think about it... x.x
midna27 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student Artist
Awsome!! ^^ *claps*
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! It took a while to finally get this one out there. Sorry for the late response!
emotional33 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that feeling
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:( Hate that feeling....
emotional33 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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