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Words by Odoms-Spire

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September 7, 2012
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The Unseen Life

I thought pain was created to fade
But it seems like my life was crafted to break
So I apologize to the mirror and say "I'm sorry, it's too late."
I can't even look at my own face, as I can never accept my mistakes

I realize that I am brokenly made
My mind bleeds away the memories I've wasted
Remorse begins to slowly fill in the gaps that are left
This stained razor blade leaves every dark moment perfectly divided
I try not to indulge in act of prayer, because I refuse to ever confess

Even in death I will never rest
All visible colors descend into the ground
And time drifts off to sleep
Every sharp outline ascends into the clouds
As this reality begins to dream

This world has truly abandoned me
I keep on doing what I've done
So I can't deny that I've forsaken hope
I couldn't stop the emptiness once it had begun
But I had no other choice, because I was left alone

All I have ever had was myself to disown
Dawning self-hatred with no end
I could only loath it silently
Can't take back what I said
Love is just a fantasy

I was born to mourn regretfully
Something that no condolences can ever express
My swift judgment was ruled secretly by thee
Guilt and blame was a part of your sentence
So I am what finally remains to be

I wish this life of mine could be unseen
Experiencing my life
Through these eyes
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TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well written, and somewhat depressing. The really sad thing, though, is that this is how I feel a lot of the time, although not as intensely as you described.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww :(
Well I hope you don't feel like this ever again!
Aaron-Jay Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful poem! and the artwork you've attatched is simply amazing... O.o I bow before you.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm just glad you enjoyed all I had to offer with this one. The artwork was kind of rushed, I could have made it better, but yeah, I might go back and remake the cover, sometime down the line.
Thanks again! :D You're too kind.
Aaron-Jay Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're to modest!:) It doesn't seem rushed at all. It's wonderful. ^_^ :dance:
Odoms-Spire Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW! This was awesome! Love the depth and emotion in this not to mention the dark feel. :love:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I tried my best with this one, so thank you. I am so glad you found this piece to your liking. :)
Odoms-Spire Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very much so! :)
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