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The Unread Letter

If I could go back in time
I would, and say what I really wanted to say
Then maybe, just maybe you would still be mine
And I never would have had to go through all of this pain

I yearn to take it all back
To cast away every word that was said
I want you to know I didn't mean any of that
Because I knew you were the one when we first met

You're the one that let go
I was the one to get left behind
You're the one that took my soul
I was the one that had a break down that night
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You said nothing
And left me waiting

I needed you to say something
I silently pleaded for you to say anything

Maybe I thought it was a hollow threat
But I knew it was a damaging move you meant

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If I only had one wish
I would ask to see you once again
And then I would beg for forgiveness
Just to try and undo all of my unjustified destruction

Every mistake made
All of the tears that were shed
Every dream of you that I created
All of the hopeless thoughts I kept

I'd give everything just for you to know
That I love you more than you could imagine
Though we may have parted paths a long time ago
You're still a part of my heart, and it's still heavily beating
If only you knew
Who this letter is addressed to

I broke down and wrote this for you
I still love you, even after all you put me through
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This poem is written for my project which is titled "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume six: My Letters To No One
The Unread Letter -
Words To Ash - [link]
Dear My Guardian Angel - [link]
S.Note - [not yet written]
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:iconlookin-for-the-truth:
'But I knew it was a damaging move you meant ' even if theyre trying to hurt u now u still love em..
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You got a point there, so I have to agree.
I hope you liked this one.
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:iconlookin-for-the-truth:
indeed i doo absolutely love it and all the feelings behind it too
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LeNerdismX3 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Kinda hurts to read, even if I still want to finish it. My heart kinda just clenched. > <" Nice work though, amazing job...
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean, a lot of my work is hard to read, even for me.....ironically....me, being the writer and all. :/
Anyway, I'm glad you thought it was good. Thanks.
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LeNerdismX3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome.^^
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kartiksharma Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing Job!♥
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. <3
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SanguineShadow Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
It's crazy how much I can relate to this. The same thing happened to me and I feel the same way
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww *hugs*
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