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The Unread Letter

If I could go back in time
I would, and say what I really wanted to say
Then maybe, just maybe you would still be mine
And I never would have had to go through all of this pain

I yearn to take it all back
To cast away every word that was said
I want you to know I didn't mean any of that
Because I knew you were the one when we first met

You're the one that let go
I was the one to get left behind
You're the one that took my soul
I was the one that had a break down that night
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You said nothing
And left me waiting

I needed you to say something
I silently pleaded for you to say anything

Maybe I thought it was a hollow threat
But I knew it was a damaging move you meant

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If I only had one wish
I would ask to see you once again
And then I would beg for forgiveness
Just to try and undo all of my unjustified destruction

Every mistake made
All of the tears that were shed
Every dream of you that I created
All of the hopeless thoughts I kept

I'd give everything just for you to know
That I love you more than you could imagine
Though we may have parted paths a long time ago
You're still a part of my heart, and it's still heavily beating
If only you knew
Who this letter is addressed to

I broke down and wrote this for you
I still love you, even after all you put me through
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This poem is written for my project which is titled "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume six: My Letters To No One
The Unread Letter -
Words To Ash - [link]
Dear My Guardian Angel - [link]
S.Note - [not yet written]
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:iconlookin-for-the-truth:
'But I knew it was a damaging move you meant ' even if theyre trying to hurt u now u still love em..
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You got a point there, so I have to agree.
I hope you liked this one.
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:iconlookin-for-the-truth:
indeed i doo absolutely love it and all the feelings behind it too
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LeNerdismX3 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Kinda hurts to read, even if I still want to finish it. My heart kinda just clenched. > <" Nice work though, amazing job...
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean, a lot of my work is hard to read, even for me.....ironically....me, being the writer and all. :/
Anyway, I'm glad you thought it was good. Thanks.
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LeNerdismX3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome.^^
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kartiksharma Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing Job!♥
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. <3
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SanguineShadow Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
It's crazy how much I can relate to this. The same thing happened to me and I feel the same way
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww *hugs*
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the-stephy-powers Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can sort of relate.
How does that country song go? I could have missed all the pain, but I would have had to miss the dance...
The funny thing is that you can't go back in time. It can be very hard to grasp that concept that everything happens for a reason sometimes.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'd probably like that song if I heard it....maybe....I'm not into country though :P
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the-stephy-powers Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
[link]
there's a link to the song.
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basehogger992 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
I can relate totally :'( unfortumatly these things happen. Favorited!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I guess it's pretty common in everyday life. :(

But thank you, I'm so glad you liked it enough to favorite. :D
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basehogger992 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
No prob. I love poetry. Especially poetry I can relate to.
IT GAVE ME FEELS
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enteringmymind Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nicely done!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :D
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beituna Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
true love is nothing friend,
love a dog, that dog will love u rest of ur life but never love a humans, may be they al are not the same, but mostly people use their brain not their heart. but a dog do whatever with his heart not with his brain.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Comparing a dog to a human...is not really relevant, but that's your opinion, and I cannot change it.
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beituna Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
compare it as a feature, not as a creature.
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spookykitty123 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student General Artist
The whole picture and verse and theme...so beautiful! You are very talented.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, I'm soo happy people enjoyed this one.
<3
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Chrono-7 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Photographer
I am now in tears....
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww I'm sorry. :(
I didn't mean to, I swears it! <3
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Chrono-7 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Photographer
Haha, it's all good. It's just that this is similar to a situation I was in a while ago. It's sad to see that others are experiencing the same thing...
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hotchillispice Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
this is beautiful! i can actually feel how much you want it!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I want it.....I want it ....badly...

(sorry, I have such a dirty mind)
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hotchillispice Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
ohh you dont have a dirty mind..don't think that. its only natural to want it...
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