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The Final Act

♪Slide knives through my veins
Put a bullet through my head
Swallow the pills to cure my pain
I will fall towards my final rest♪


If you're reading this
I can't say that I'm sorry

Too low have I fallen
I gave into those past memories

I allowed this to happen
But in the end I was able to find peace


♪Slide knives through my veins
Put a bullet through my head
Swallow the pills to cure my pain
I will fall towards my final rest♪


You tried to help me cope
When I was at my wit's end

But as soon as you left me alone
The darkness made its descent

It's corruption was mine to hone
A shadowy friend that I wouldn't resent


♪Slide knives through my veins
Put a bullet through my head
Swallow the pills to cure my pain
I will fall towards my final rest♪


The only one who cared was you
I realized that near the end of my life

So you're the one I need to say this to
Every time I looked into your eyes

You gave me hope and got me through
So don't give up on trying to save other lives


♪Slide knives through my veins
Put a bullet through my head
Swallow the pills to cure my pain
I will fall towards my final rest♪
The soundwaves are the voice of your soul
And when the music stops...so does the hope...
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This poem is written for my project, titled "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume ten: The Downfall
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As part of :icondalinksystem: I would like to feature --->
The Petulant PetalProselyting the petulant
petal of paraphrase.
Call him king
and move onward to the morrow.
Nothing else sells
such as sorrow -
sadly.

Never has value more than Ever
and the risk is all venture in a capital
offense;
soul and mind the sinner.
We know the body is but a sloth
and society is but an atom
reflection - eve of Adam.

But do we see the artwork
of the sagacity and artist?
No, we supply the demand of man
and women falter to impress. . .
he who does not impress himself.

There is no reprieve -
from the dawn of another humanized dream.
by :icontristancody: Check him out, he's one of the best writers out there!
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LelleyAnne Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
Both the writing and the art work are amazing!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed all I had to offer with this upload. :)
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midna27 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student Artist
Wow. :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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midna27 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Artist
welcome!!!
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I relate to this incredibly well. Beautifully written as always ♥
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy that you liked this poem. Even though the subject is a touchy one. <3
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