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Tread harshly on my nightmares

Make all my fears disappear

Hold me close, my rainstopper

So I won't be alone...anymore
A night like tonight-
It'll be alright
...To cry...

Tears seem to fly-
Within glistening light
...So fine...

Relieve thy tired heart
Put thy pain in my arms
Allow those woes to depart

The strong are the weak ones / Once the damage is finally done
Crack and shatter my soul / My protected tears are no more
Don't let my sympathy be wasted / My morals won't become faded

I'm leaving my heart open / Don't let yourself worsen
I will always care / I will always be here
This is what I will always be / The vanquisher of your agony

A day like today
You'll be okay
...Smiling astray...

Bathe in this sunshine
Doubts will ignite
...In time...

Recover thy power
You survived the darkest hour
Now it's time for me to answer another prayer
Hail, the selfless crusader

I will always remember

The peace after the harm

And the calm...after the storm
As I walk through the valley of storms
I will abolish all doubts and take away all harm
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This poem is written for my project, titled - "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume four: Weightless Burdens
Tearcatcher - Not Yet Written
Stormwalker -
Scarmaker -

Your promises kept
Breaking   Breaking   Breaking
I tried to hold onto those hopeful words you said
But you've always managed to hurt the both of us in the end

These tears shed
Seething  Seething  Seething
Down and away like liquified memories of regret
While every stinging mistake rushes back and quickly spreads

My hands left
Trembling   Trembling   Trembling
I find myself feeling lost in this inner emptiness
As all of my love for you continually bleeds out of my chest

This is our last resort / Please don't say it's so!
There's no trus

Dreamtaker -

SLIPPING   Slipping   slipping

I almost had it right in my palms

AWAY   Away   away

My eyes open wide like my lungs

GASPING   Gasping   gasping

Accumulated back into this world as I awake

PAIN   Pain   pain

Gathering the moments of the dream before it fades

REAPING   Reaping   reaping

My desired world is always taken from me

FAITH   Faith   faith

I never wanted it to be make belief

FEELING   Feeling   feeling

That un

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Shadow World
Shadow World

It's enveloping my heart
And   tainting   my   soul
I've been corrupted by the dark
A   new   power   to   behold

I'm too far gone already
Just   give   in
Accepting my tragedy
A   new   path   will   begin

Transform into what I dreamed of
No   longer   afraid
The road to peace will be victorious
A   triumph   so   great

I closed my eyes for the last time / I watched it all disappear
I left behind my old life / I've become what I've feared
I know this path is one that very few desire
But what's done is done
Never again will I look into a mirror
For my darkness and I have become one

It's what I've always want
The Peace Seeker
The Peace Seeker

Whispers that no one hears

The world is deaf from despair

The sun becomes my throne

As I watch reality become undone
Someone can be another person's hero
If only love existed

Dusk will break with a darker tomorrow
Another day of being two-faced

Every second- a promise is broken
Every minute- a tear is taken

Every hour- a smile is forced
Every day- a child is born

I stitch my mouth shut / I finally had enough
Silence is my sin / Truth is my friend

Seal my eyes wide / Lies can finally hide
I will witness no evil / I will force another smile

Anyone can be someone's demon
Because greed insists it

Peace is no
Idle No More
Idle No More

Scattered bravery can and will unite!

Come together and let us stand up for our rights!

Let our voices ascend from this condescending lament!

Rise up and fight against the bitter injustice to the very end!
Generations have come and passed
But here has come a time
Where this bloodline may be the last

This is what we call life
Choked by the government's grasp
And abiding by the lies they hurl in a mass

Promises were disguised / Words were lies
We couldn't cross that line / A law where corruption aligns

A home that I can't call mine / A reservation to silence the mourning
A place for the shame they hide / A destruct

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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it! All of it! I can't even find the words... This is simply amazing!
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thank you so much. I'm so glad you felt that way about this poem. It means a lot.
Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :)
midna27 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Artist
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

What part[s] did you like the most?
midna27 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Artist
all of it.
Aaron-Jay Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional General Artist
I really like the positive tone in this poem. The voice of the poem is a soothing caring one that seems to want the best for the reader. It's actually very calming to read it. It's like I confessed something dark and personal.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

I was trying my best to aim for that kind of response. I really wanted to do a series of different points of views. So each dreamcatcher holds a different element, rather than all being the same genre or whatever. So, I'm happy to have accomplished a different element to this volume of poems. :D
Thank you Aaron! :)
Aaron-Jay Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
Well, you have achieved what you were aiming for! Congrats good sir! :D
suzy-is-cool-32 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i sang all of that by myself, you are awesome
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, that's awesome! :D
Thank you so much.
suzy-is-cool-32 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
youre welc.

i didnt record it tho.
S3CRETS0UL Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
Simply amazing.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for your kind words! :D
S3CRETS0UL Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   General Artist
You are so welcome=D!!
I would have said more but at the moment I am speechless ^^;.
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