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Silent Faith

My trembling hands
Don't want to come together

I refuse to feel weakness
Oppress the confessor

I will defy the defeat
Of my body and mind

And my tears will freeze
So I...will never cry

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I was once told
That I have to be strong
But a child can never grow old
When reminded that every action is wrong

I didn't need to know
That strength was everything
I would have given up a long time ago
Because that is my hollowed instinct

Take back every single breath / Take back those moments I lived
I am not some stepping stone / I am not meant to have a torn soul

You can only push so much / I can choose to give up
You're the only one who's the judge / I can define who's the fraud


I once believed
That resolve was protection
But all forms of relief abandoned me
I crumbled upon the footholds of absolution

I never knew
Of exile or despair
Or what has gotten me through
To the point where I need to disappear

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My broken bones weep
Holding up the weight of the world

Through the bottled up tears I can still see
As I take another wrong step forward

I will wear a mask of pride
In front of you- I will not break

As I bathe in this false light
I...dare not speak of my silent faith
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A piece can forever be broken
But the will to exist cannot be easily taken
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Mood: Love =IndigoOfTheHeavens Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
O.O .................................... Amazing............

*stunned silent awe*

Truly, spectacularly, beautiful~~~~ O.O

Your poetry, the moving words, the power of the metaphors and the undercurrent of faith... I faved it for the moving image itself and then read this and wish I can fave it a thousand more times for the poem itself.... TTvTT Truly beautiful~ :icontouchedplz:
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Mood: Love ~ImmortalizedLies Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is the comment of the month.
Thank you so much for your kind words, it made me smile when I read it. I'm so happy that you were able to connect to this deviation. <3
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~midna27 Nov 17, 2012  Student Artist
*wipes away a tear* that was awsome!
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Mood: Love ~ImmortalizedLies Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thank you so much. <3 :D I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
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~midna27 Nov 22, 2012  Student Artist
Your welcome dude!! ^^
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~Zarakoda Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really meaningful to me. Thank you for sharing this!
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Mood: Love ~ImmortalizedLies Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww, thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D
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Mood: Love ~Aaron-Jay Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oooo! Powerful! I even spoke it outloud because it read so angry! :D I love it!!! LOVE IT!!!
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Mood: Adoration ~ImmortalizedLies Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Lol, I was trying my best to make it so it doesn't read as "angry" but it was hard to come out of that. In a way I guess it comes off that way in a sense. I tried to layer the emotions. I'm so glad you liked it though. <3
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