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Silent Faith

My trembling hands-
Don't want to come together

I refuse to feel weakness-
Oppress the confessor

I will defy the defeat-
Of my body and mind

And my tears will freeze-
So I...will never cry
I was always told
That I have to be strong
But a child can never grow
When reminded that every decision is wrong
I didn't need to know
That strength was everything
Otherwise I would have given up a long time ago
Because that is my childish instinct

Take back every single breath / Take back those moments I lived
Take back those nightmares I dreamt / Take back those days I wept
I can only take so much / I can choose to give up
I'm not the one who's being the judge / I'm not the one who's being the fraud

I once believed
That resolve was protection
But all forms of relief abandoned me
I crumble upon the footholds of absolution
I never really knew
Of exile or singularity
Or what has gotten me through
To the point where attempting suicide is my therapy
My broken bones weep-
Holding up the weight of the world

Through the bottled-up tears- I can still see
As I take another wrong step forward

I will wear a mask of pride
In front of you- I will not break

While I endure this false light-
I...dare not speak of my silent faith
A piece can forever be broken
But the will to exist cannot be easily taken
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In volume eight: The Derevolution
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Viidith22 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing! :wow: :D
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
Viidith22 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :) :D
lidsworth Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This was really good!
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, it really means a lot. <3
IndigoOfTheHeavens Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
O.O .................................... Amazing............

*stunned silent awe*

Truly, spectacularly, beautiful~~~~ O.O

Your poetry, the moving words, the power of the metaphors and the undercurrent of faith... I faved it for the moving image itself and then read this and wish I can fave it a thousand more times for the poem itself.... TTvTT Truly beautiful~ :icontouchedplz:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is the comment of the month.
Thank you so much for your kind words, it made me smile when I read it. I'm so happy that you were able to connect to this deviation. <3
midna27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Artist
*wipes away a tear* that was awsome!
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thank you so much. <3 :D I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
midna27 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Artist
Your welcome dude!! ^^
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