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October 10, 2012
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Dear mother, dear father
Dear brother, dear sister

Don't worry, you still have each other
And without me you're all so much stronger
Leave me behind and let me go, I promise the days will get brighter

Dear teachers, dear counselors
Dear therapists, dear doctors

You have my gratitude for what you all did
But I hit rock bottom too many times, and this last one was it
The end of the road again, as if no one could have kept me from a coffin
I was not fit to live life
I failed at everything, every time
I sincerely did my very best, I really tried
I just could no longer stand feeling so powerless inside

I lay wide awake every night
I prayed and prayed and asked "why?"
I was always silently drowning in the tears I cried
I am done with suffering, so this is where I draw the line

This is the end
One with a resentful beginning
It all came crashing down to nothing
It's what's only right, so I know what I'm doing
Dear friends, dear betrayers
Dear relatives, dear deserters

I must have been too meaningless
While you all just stood by and watched, motionless
But I guess no one wants to try and help someone who is beyond broken

Dear heroes, dear villains
Dear angels, dear demons

You hurt me, and you also saved me
It became a damaging cycle that dragged on endlessly
I couldn't take it anymore, I was just holding on so hopelessly
I'm defeating my destiny, I'm ending my fate, this is how it all must be
The pen finally broke
From all the pain I wrote
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This poem is written for my project, titled- "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume six: My Letters To No One
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midna27 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student Artist
awsome as usual dude.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm just so glad you enjoyed this one. :D It means a lot.
midna27 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Artist
i like your poetry. its alot better than mine i tell ya.
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