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Only In My Memories

The thoughts are like frost-bitten pins
Everything goes numb when the cycle begins

I'm every sin

No hands were lent, no hands to take
Abandonment   abandonment   abandonment
No tears were shed, no tears to make
Abolishment   abolishment   abolishment
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The images are like venomized needles
After the feelings are injected, I'm left fearful

I'm chaotically peaceful

This self-suffering is man-made, so I hope for my own sake
Heart infection   heart infection   heart infection
I thought it was destiny, but I fell for you too late
Bad medicine   bad medicine   bad medicine
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The tension is like an edge of a tempted knife
Idled on the surface, it's always ready to slice

I'm hardly alive

Countless slivers of pain enter my already-damaged blood stream
It's coursing through, it's coursing through, it's coursing through
I want to let it all out, but I can't seem to bring myself to bleed
I'm thinking of you, I'm thinking of you, I'm thinking of you
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The dreams are like the screams which keep my eyes open
Remembering that regretful past, I never want to see it again

I'm -so- broken

Though I continue to pray for this haunting face of yours to finally fade
Sleep is such a delicacy, sleep is such a delicacy, sleep is such a delicacy
But I cannot wait before it's already too late, I don't want to give into a shameful fate
You're only in my memories, you're only in my memories, you're only in my memories

"Stay where you belong; in my memories."
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It's haunting
It's taunting

My love
is destructive

Your beauty
is tragedy
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The quote at the end is from Cloud. FF7: AC
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~epicfallen Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very deep, love it overall. Again, the artwork is just amazing, and seems to capture the feel of the poem perfectly. Very well done :)
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Mood: Wow! *ImmortalizedLies Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had a lot of fun (trouble) getting the art cover right, lol. But I think it fits just right.
I wrote it for one of my friends, they were going through a hard time, with a break up and all. He loved it for the most part, it's just one of those that's hard to read.
Thank you again. ( Oh, and I <3 your avatar, kakashi and itachi ;) )
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~epicfallen Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well you did an awesome job with the art, so it was worth it XD
And no problem, and thanks. Kakashi and Itachi are both my faves :D
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:iconhikarinomelody:
Very nice and I feel like this one cut very deep. I love the wording of this, especially:
"The images are like venomized needles
After the feelings are injected, I'm left fearful

I'm chaotically peaceful"



The memory was long forgotten, wishing for her master to remember
But was left alone and pushed away like a burned out ember.
I want to be relived again, to make you see me as I once was
and yet you deny me of the light, you out me away because
of the pain it brings you, or so you thought. Look deeper in me and try to see
the misunderstanding from which you were blinded, this isn't what you need to be.
Not crippled with fear nor cringing with pain, it doesn't have to be
so just try and look back and see, try to look back at me...

perspective of a misunderstood memory of the past
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Mood: Joy *ImmortalizedLies May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That particular line you liked was one of the few which I changed a few times when I was in the writing process. Lol, the first one was crap, and the second version was too over the top, and it was swaying away from the concept. So I thought this third version of the line fit very well.

^_^
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:iconhikarinomelody:
well, you definitely fixed it up very nicely :D
Its very deep and I felt like it was a very descriptive part. It definitely flowed with the whole theme and I really liked it :)
please keep up the great work XD
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:iconlexigirl1aal:
i think i like it most because it cuts to the heart. The emotions in this run really deep-- but i feel like i can empathize (similar relationship of my own...)
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Mood: Joy *ImmortalizedLies May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I made it as deep as I could have, but not too deep :p
I'm glad you liked this one! :D
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~SoulEaterXMaka May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that is amazing...
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Mood: Love *ImmortalizedLies May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D
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