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March 17, 2012
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One final leap into the depths below is all it really takes
Open my lungs up, and let freezing freedom take my breath away
I did my time here on Earth, I served my time in life
So now I'm done, it's over, I no longer need to be alive
I've seen what cannot be unseen, I've done what I cannot undo
I cannot change the past, and the future is what I cannot live through





A watery grave is what I have dreamed of, it's all I have ever really wanted
A slow, and silent decent, it's an honor to finally become one of the departed
My eyes unknowingly darken, as I instantly try to grasp onto the last of the light
Realizing this is the last time I'll see through my human body, it's such a beautiful sight
But crying underwater seems like it's impossible to do, so I'll still try my best to defy the odds
Because I know I've felt all of the different kinds of pain, so this is me letting go of what I've got  





I suddenly feel all of the world's weight pressing down on me, crushingly
It's like every burden in existence is burying me, completely
I feel every tear of every soul showering me, peacefully
All of that invisible hurt is entering me, such agony
Pulling me down deeper and deeper, please hurry
I don't regret this, but I'm still so sorry





I close my eyes, and all I hear is the echo of bubbles escaping their way to the surface
My body can no longer feel anything, but it seems that my soul still has some purpose
It's so calm now, I can't tell if I'm still lingering, this is a different kind of peace
But I guess this must be it, this is what death is like, when you let the pain finally cease
Letting go, to move on, it's something we all must do at one point or another
Moving on, to let go, because no human should ever have to suffer




*Queue's Extreme Ways*

I'm tired, too tired
Too long have I suffered

Let me drown, let me finally leave
Cease my breathing, just to gain my peace

For my project - "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume two: The Dark Rapture

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Im-buried-alive Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Damn!!! that was awesome! That is really deep and dark,love it man.
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one that much. It was really different writing this poem. Thank you for your enthusiasm. It lifted my spirit up when I read this.
midna27 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Artist
this pic reminds me of this song:[link]
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, I really like that song. It's my first time listening to it. Thank you for sharing it with me. :D
midna27 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Artist
Your welcome!! Intension by tool is a good song to.
uganija Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist
i must say it took me away from my seat in front of the computer into that deep water :)! i enjoyed reading this, really great effect!
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry for the late response.
I'm surprised it had that effect :P
This was one of those 'in the moment' type poems, I wrote it after I saw this movie, and it probably took about an hour to finalize everything. This was a fun one to write, in my mind, I pictured myself in that situation and thought of what it would be like. And this is what I came up with in the end. <3 Thank you.
uganija Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist
it's ok :) and yes for me it did have the effect and it's something not everyone can achieve :)
peoshade Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student General Artist
it's so sad and beautiful ... i like it :)
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's what I was aiming for ^.^ So glad you like it. :D
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