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In My Memories

My love for you felt like frost-bitten pins
My heart, body, mind, and soul were numbing

This double-edged conscience~

No hands were lent / No hands to take
Abandonment    Abandonment   Abandonment
Countless tears to shed / Countless tears to make
Abolishment   Abolishment   Abolishment
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The thoughts of you are like venomous-needles
After the emotions are injected the end seems less beautiful

Pain is unforgettable~

This unrequited suffering is self-made
No affection   No affection   No affection
I hoped you were the one but I fell for you too late
Bad medicine   Bad medicine   Bad medicine
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The lights that instantly caught my eyes
Were too promising to believe it was just another lie

Cruel by design~

Anxiety enters my already-damaged bloodstream
It's coursing   It's coursing   It's coursing
I destroy myself little by little with every silent scream
It's unnerving   It's unnerving   It's unnerving
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The dreams of the past keep my eyes open
Yearning for the half of myself that you have stolen

You're never forgotten~

When I first saw you I knew it was already too late
Peace is a delicacy   Peace is a delicacy   Peace is a delicacy
'til this day I still pray for your haunting face to fade away
You're still in my memories   You're still in my memories   You're still in my memories
It's haunting
It's taunting

My love-
Is destructive

Your beauty-
Is tragedy
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The heart and hand - [link]
the pm bg- [link]
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This poem was revised for my project, titled "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume one: A Tragedy In The Making

Hook Up
Hook Up

It takes the-two-of-us
To give-into-our-lust
And to break-our-trust
It's not destiny-or-love
This is just-a-free-fuck
Come on and let-the-ring-slide-off
Our hips will thrust-from-dawn-til-dusk
This is just a one-night-hook-up
(2x)
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Advertisement for the human body
There's no shame...in this day and age

We're beyond discrete with irreversible secrecy
Hell...we don't even know each others names

We just say blank words, without lies or truths
Sensing a hint of...loneliness

And our lips finally form a truce
A one night stand is...sometimes harmless

Eharmony / Tinder / Mingle / Badoo
Grindr / Growlr / Scruff / Squirt
HowAboutWe / Sko
No More Therapy
No More Therapy

Nothing works anymore
I knew it all along; the end is near
I've said it once and I've said it before
I was never meant to exist; I was not meant to be here

Hated by all / See me fall
Loved by none / Heart is numb
Rejected by life / Fallen from strife
From this- I've become / After this- I'm done

Through this blame
Is the choice
Of my decision

Hear the pain
In my voice
I am suffering
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I no longer could drown out the sounds
Swallowed from within
I was surrounded by an internal doubt
Regretting everything

Remember the days
Relive the nights
Of my shame
In my mind

Growing up in society
I got lost
Being raised with hypocrisy
Alcohol Fueled Words
Alcohol Fueled Words

Blame can go a long ways
When the problems stay intact
Guilt always refuses to fade
After another hurtful attack

Regret has an unquenchable thirst
While voices are thrown every direction
Rage is tightly bottled up until the next outburst
Though the tears dry, the reasons for them won't be easily forgiven

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You bring out those secret, false words I don't even mean
You push me over the edge, and get rid of my sense of controllability
You expose hidden feelings that are supposed to be locked deep within me

You pull me into a downward spiral, to release my brutality
You choose innocent targets to go for, but y


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midna27 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student Artist
*claps happily* that was awsome. ^^
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. It was really refreshing rewriting it. :D
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midna27 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Artist
^^
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epicfallen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Very deep, love it overall. Again, the artwork is just amazing, and seems to capture the feel of the poem perfectly. Very well done :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had a lot of fun (trouble) getting the art cover right, lol. But I think it fits just right.
I wrote it for one of my friends, they were going through a hard time, with a break up and all. He loved it for the most part, it's just one of those that's hard to read.
Thank you again. ( Oh, and I <3 your avatar, kakashi and itachi ;) )
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epicfallen Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well you did an awesome job with the art, so it was worth it XD
And no problem, and thanks. Kakashi and Itachi are both my faves :D
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HikariNoMelody Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
Very nice and I feel like this one cut very deep. I love the wording of this, especially:
"The images are like venomized needles
After the feelings are injected, I'm left fearful

I'm chaotically peaceful"



The memory was long forgotten, wishing for her master to remember
But was left alone and pushed away like a burned out ember.
I want to be relived again, to make you see me as I once was
and yet you deny me of the light, you out me away because
of the pain it brings you, or so you thought. Look deeper in me and try to see
the misunderstanding from which you were blinded, this isn't what you need to be.
Not crippled with fear nor cringing with pain, it doesn't have to be
so just try and look back and see, try to look back at me...

perspective of a misunderstood memory of the past
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That particular line you liked was one of the few which I changed a few times when I was in the writing process. Lol, the first one was crap, and the second version was too over the top, and it was swaying away from the concept. So I thought this third version of the line fit very well.

^_^
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HikariNoMelody Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
well, you definitely fixed it up very nicely :D
Its very deep and I felt like it was a very descriptive part. It definitely flowed with the whole theme and I really liked it :)
please keep up the great work XD
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lexigirl1aal Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
i think i like it most because it cuts to the heart. The emotions in this run really deep-- but i feel like i can empathize (similar relationship of my own...)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I made it as deep as I could have, but not too deep :p
I'm glad you liked this one! :D
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SoulEaterXMaka Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that is amazing...
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D
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SoulEaterXMaka Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^w^
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E-DinaPhotoArt Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
I´m so broken ... oh my god this is so good !!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
;) Thank you, I'm so relieved this one has done well.
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E-DinaPhotoArt Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
:)
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kartiksharma Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
amazing!!
Nice work!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Thank you so much!
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Simplymichy Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Very deep and the intensity of the photo it beautiful.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I gave it my all on this one. So I'm relieved to see someone say that. Thank you very much! <#
I'm happy that you liked this piece.
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Simplymichy Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're welcome! (:
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LupuHeluMara Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very well written! I'm gald I read this =] I haven't made any poems for awhile but I feel like making something now after reading yours. =]
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
I'm surprised to bring inspiration to someone. I sure do hope you end up writing something! :D
Thank you.
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Chaleka Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your poem is awe inspiring. The repetition, the needle images, the pace...flawless! It flows, deliberately. I relate with the nostalgic lost love in it entirely. Your talent is self evident, and its poets like you that make me glad i joined DA.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so, so much, I'm greatly humbled by your kind compliment. :D
I'm very glad you enjoyed this poem as much as you did. <3
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domarxy Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Don't be sad. It just a broken chocolate :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
But...its a delicious broken chocolate :'(
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SoraLove Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Well said.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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ametueraspirant Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What's this all about again? Knives and needles and bad medicine, all this analyzing is making my eyes hurt...
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You can do it Neo! You need to believe!

Free....your mind.
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ametueraspirant Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Is neo a type of walrus?
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bella-art-xoxo Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is amazzzing.. beaut picture <3 adding it too my favourites ;)
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shadowwolves17 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
*speechless* damn. That was...amazing and emotional to say the least. Great job.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much ^.^ That means a lot, it really does. :D
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
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WriteByNumbers Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...that was beautiful. The raw emotion...I cannot describe.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I tried to keep the flow tight as I could. I'm relieved people like it. ^.^
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WriteByNumbers Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, you did a good job! It almost sounds like a song. (;
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Lucy-Damien998 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i like it is so deep U_U
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Deepest of the deepest! :O
<3
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absolutend Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
cool
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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NamineXKairi225 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Very haunting, sounds almost like a creepy song :3
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!
I guess maybe that's what I was aiming for all along.
Thank you so much!
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NamineXKairi225 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
n_n you're welcome <3
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bmwhite04 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
This is a very great piece. I like the haunting melody.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I gave it my best shot! :)
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