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In Between Dreams

A fragment of a second
Just one slight glance

You're the only person
That puts me in a trance

I feel so close to you
But I am so far away

If only you knew
I felt this way
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To fully express this feeling
It's like raw torture at heart
Because you live on without knowing
And it makes me desire you even more

A solace night of dreaming
I thought I never would have it
This longing luxury of sleeping
It's what I've always wanted

I thought it was too much to ask for
A sense of rest and relief
I feel as if it's more than I deserve
It's been so long since I had this nightmaric disease

I wish you could know
Of the peace that you bring me
It's something I never had before
I'd give anything to always have this serenity

Never again do I wish to awake
I can't let this placebo end
It's for my own sake
I can only pretend
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When I see your face
I can't blink

I don't feel the pain
My sorrow sinks

And I always wait
After you leave

Praying to see you again
In between dreams
Holding me down / Lifting me up
Pain is unbound / Despair isn't enough
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that was pretty
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. <3
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Malesx Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
very nice
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you liked it. :D
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Malesx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
thank you me dear
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AnglAlejandro Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Interesting!!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, thank you.
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Spyndyl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Completely and utterly lovely. :heart:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Aww you're too kind. Thank you for your kind words. :D
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