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In Between Dreams

A fragment of a second
Just one slight glance

You're the only person
That puts me in a trance

I feel so close to you
But I am so far away

If only you knew
I felt this way
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To fully express this feeling
It's like raw torture at heart
Because you live on without knowing
And it makes me desire you even more

A solace night of dreaming
I thought I never would have it
This longing luxury of sleeping
It's what I've always wanted

I thought it was too much to ask for
A sense of rest and relief
I feel as if it's more than I deserve
It's been so long since I had this nightmaric disease

I wish you could know
Of the peace that you bring me
It's something I never had before
I'd give anything to always have this serenity

Never again do I wish to awake
I can't let this placebo end
It's for my own sake
I can only pretend
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When I see your face
I can't blink

I don't feel the pain
My sorrow sinks

And I always wait
After you leave

Praying to see you again
In between dreams
Holding me down / Lifting me up
Pain is unbound / Despair isn't enough
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that was pretty
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. <3
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Malesx Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
very nice
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you liked it. :D
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Malesx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
thank you me dear
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AnglAlejandro Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Interesting!!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, thank you.
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Spyndyl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Completely and utterly lovely. :heart:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Aww you're too kind. Thank you for your kind words. :D
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Spyndyl Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just kind enough, I like to think. Well-deserved, though. :)
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AnimeDreaminluv Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wooow! SOO poeticly bonita!!!!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, well thank you so much. <3 It means a lot.
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Akiho-Shire Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome~
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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TheHandsomeRockLee Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Divine! Also... :iconsora-rape-face-plz:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!
That just made my day x.x Thank you so much.
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xXSunnyDayLoverXx Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't believe you were the first to comment on that XD
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Aaron-Jay Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! :D very dark. but romantic at the same time. I know this feeling. Staying in the shadows, loving someone that doesn't realize how you feel about them and you can't risk to tell them because it would ruin your relationship. It's a beautiful poem. It's wonderful! :D
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, that's exactly what it's about. And that's also what inspired this from real life. I really like the new ending, the last one wasn't that...potent.
Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked it. :D
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Aaron-Jay Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I did, and no problem. :D You're a wonderful poet. :D
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InView Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Super wonderful.
powerful!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. It means a lot, and I tried my best. <3 Thanks again.
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InView Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Well it sure shows It is beautiful :D
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Silver-GreenStripes Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
Lovely:) it flows very well, paints a beautiful picture.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so relieved you connected to this. I was so hoping for someone to say that! :D Thank you.
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Silver-GreenStripes Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
You're so welcome:D
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is well written. I applaud you. :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I feel honored ^_^
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NigmaSin Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Beautiful.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :D
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
:)
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simone56 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Photographer
Very pretty. :)
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this. :)
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CutePoochyena261 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful^^
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you found this to your liking. :D
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