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Frozen Whirlpool

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Frozen Whirlpool

Somewhere...in the ocean
There is a whirlpool...that is...frozen

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I no longer had anything keeping me bound to this world
You were my love, you were my chain, and my heart was a link
And I couldn't bear the thought of never seeing your face anymore
So my knees gave, as I let my thoughts break, and I forced myself to sink
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Somewhere...in the darkness
There is a soul...which became faithless

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All those memories down the drain
I feel the bitterness of hope
While my tears rain
I cannot cope
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Somewhere...in the depths
There is a spark...cradled by emptiness

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My pain will always remain in time
As I never wanted to let you go
But I still got left behind
Only to dwell in remorse
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Somewhere...along the path
Came a point...where I couldn't stand

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I knew there would be no moving on
And there would be no going back
Because I can't stand the thought
Of potentially losing any of that
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Somewhere...in my mind
There is a time...when I loved my life

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Never have I been this hurt
Feeling this massacre in my heart
This is a level of damage I haven't faced before
It's as if the ruins of my shattered core got torn apart
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And somewhere...within the sea
There is a broken heart...that belongs to...me
There is no justice for lost hope
There is no redemption when one lets go
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This poem is written for my project, titled
"The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume two: The Dark Rapture

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YuukiNatsumiYagami's avatar
i love the whole thing but i especially love the ending with that impact