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March 26, 2013
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Embers In The Rain

My blood contains the power of the sun
Instigation becomes dangerous
And when control is reduced to none
My rage is monstrous

There's no turning back when it begins
I will be searching for a source to blame
I will unleash a torrent of hell from within
For I am known as the bearer of the flame

I loath crossing that line
Being locked behind blind eyes

But I won't regret the ruins that I will create
As I leave supernova footprints in my wake

I destroy everything more than once! / My limits are undone!
Infinite ashes haunt darkening lungs! / My heart becomes numb!

Consuming infernos help me cope
As I bathe in the smothering smoke

Cleansing the vengeance
New aged repentance

Searing the memories that I yearn
As soothing water puts out my roaring fire
My traumatized eyes sting and burn
I can never call myself a survivor

The aftermath is my salvation
For I am alone once again
This was my last trial and tribulation
Now I am just another ember in the rain
Ignite the fury in the bottle
I swear I will bring my own version of hell
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This poem was written for my project, -
In volume ten: The Downfall

Embers In The Rain -
The Final Act - The Final Act
The Final Act

♪Slide knives through my veins
Put a bullet through my head
Swallow the pills to cure my pain
I will fall towards my final rest♪

If you're reading this
I can't say that I'm sorry

Too low have I fallen
I gave into those past memories

I allowed this to happen
But in the end I was able to find peace

♪Slide knives through my veins
Put a bullet through my head
Swallow the pills to cure my pain
I will fall towards my final rest♪

You tried to help me cope
When I was at my wit's end

But as soon as you left me alone
The darkness made its descent

It's corruption was mine to hone
A shadowy friend that I woul

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Aaron-Jay Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm.... this poem leaves the reader with a lot to think about... Don't get me wrong! It's a good thing! :D But it's very heavy and let's the reader in on some inner turmoil you(or the person's eyes you're writing through) are going through. I really do like this concept that you keep using over and over again. I wish I could write from another person's eyes as easily as you can. :D You are a great writer, my friend.
ImmortalizedLies Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks Aaron!
I don't know if you saw it on my personal facebook page, but I did this little freestyle verse randomly, because the lines would just not leave my mind. So later I came back to that post and decided to make something of it. I had a title stored away, along with a concept. "Embers In The Rain" was born! I was glad to finally be able to use up that title. :P
Nokito-Tan Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ImmortalizedLies Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Evalnia Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beatifully written. Stunning.. Simply stunning.
ImmortalizedLies Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for your kind words. Sorry it has taken so long to reply. I'm becoming slow at keeping up with my messages.
Evalnia Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. That's okay, no problem :)
LyricalInfinity Mar 26, 2013  Student Writer
Very Wagnerian ! :)
ImmortalizedLies Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wait.....I just read the rest of his profile....... x.x
Now I don't know what to think x.x I read he was a creator of music dramas............and then I read...the other stuff about him...

What did you mean by that? :'(
LyricalInfinity Apr 8, 2013  Student Writer
I'm only talking about an ideological crisis. Dichotomy between Heaven and Heaven. Religious references and internal wars.

Nothing negative. :)
Though, Wagner is really a genius. His life and character is thus controversial
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