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Dear My Guardian Angel

I was born with an invisible noose, and as I got older it got tighter
I kept looking for the perfect opportunity to drop, it's either now or never

Dear Heaven / Dear Hell / I am my own executioner!
Every night, I lay awake, starring down a loaded barrel of a gun
Aimed at my tempting skull, and the trigger is ready to go off

Dear God / Dear Lucifer / I am not that promising child I once was!
I've always stood on the edge of my life with adrenaline-fueled anxiety
That corruption coursed through, and took over, it's too late already

Dear Paradise / Dear Purgatory / You need to wait a little longer, and wait patiently!
I'm such a cowardice fool; sick and hysterical; I can't decide anything for myself
I'm abandoned; I'm a cast away; I am the last forsaken, and I no longer have a way out

Dear Friends / Dear Enemies / I'm sorry, but neither of you can help!
I tried everything in my power to change, but the damage is over and done
But I'm just too weak to carry on this way, so there is no turning back now

Dear Love / Dear Hate / Send your condolences to someone else, and just place me into the ground!
There was false promises, and hollow words that this pain will soon be over
But I always kind of knew that I was going to be the one to end it, one way or another

Dear Family / Dear Nobody / I wish we could have gotten to know each other just a little better!
My final hour is here, so I say my long lost vows, and forgotten apologies
The end is near, so I get rid of everything, along with deceit and beliefs

Dear Light / Dear Darkness / I don't deserve either of you, and you don't deserve me!
The rope snaps; my neck cracks; the bullet blasts; this breath is my last
I fell off of the edge, and into the palms of my death; my time has passed

Dear You / Dear Me / Peace is finally in my grasp!
I don't know if what I did was wrong, or even right, if I deserved to live, or if it was my time to die
All I know is that I was tired of living day after day, and night after night with this kind of life

Dear My Guardian Angel / Dear My Broken Failure / I'm so sorry that I made you cry...
It's too late
To try and defy fate
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This poem was written for my project- "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume six: My Letters To No One
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Coeb Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Dont blink?
I'm so confused, what does that even mean? o.o /Scrolled the comments/

...Anyway, the ending of this, so gorgeous<3
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, it's a quote from a the popular tv show "Dr. Who" and apparently this reminded a lot of the fans of it. :P

And thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Coeb Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Ah, I....never watched that. Haha. ^^

And it was extremely well written, of course I dont like it! I love it.<3
TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
First thought: don't blink.
MixedScales Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, this was a great read. and ware could I find the "The Prodigy's Suicide"?
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ Thank you so much, and "The Prodigy's Suicide" is still in the making. All of the poems located in my gallery will all be in the book. So you can read what is going to be in the book before it's released. I hope that answered your question, feel free to ask anything else.
gravenimagez Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Professional Artist
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful.:clap:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :D
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