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Dear My Guardian Angel

I was born with an invisible noose, and as I got older it got tighter
I kept looking for the perfect opportunity to drop, it's either now or never


Dear Heaven / Dear Hell / I am my own executioner!
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Every night, I lay awake, starring down a loaded barrel of a gun
Aimed at my tempting skull, and the trigger is ready to go off


Dear God / Dear Lucifer / I am not that promising child I once was!
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I've always stood on the edge of my life with adrenaline-fueled anxiety
That corruption coursed through, and took over, it's too late already


Dear Paradise / Dear Purgatory / You need to wait a little longer, and wait patiently!
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I'm such a cowardice fool; sick and hysterical; I can't decide anything for myself
I'm abandoned; I'm a cast away; I am the last forsaken, and I no longer have a way out


Dear Friends / Dear Enemies / I'm sorry, but neither of you can help!
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I tried everything in my power to change, but the damage is over and done
But I'm just too weak to carry on this way, so there is no turning back now


Dear Love / Dear Hate / Send your condolences to someone else, and just place me into the ground!
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There was false promises, and hollow words that this pain will soon be over
But I always kind of knew that I was going to be the one to end it, one way or another


Dear Family / Dear Nobody / I wish we could have gotten to know each other just a little better!
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My final hour is here, so I say my long lost vows, and forgotten apologies
The end is near, so I get rid of everything, along with deceit and beliefs


Dear Light / Dear Darkness / I don't deserve either of you, and you don't deserve me!
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The rope snaps; my neck cracks; the bullet blasts; this breath is my last
I fell off of the edge, and into the palms of my death; my time has passed


Dear You / Dear Me / Peace is finally in my grasp!
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I don't know if what I did was wrong, or even right, if I deserved to live, or if it was my time to die
All I know is that I was tired of living day after day, and night after night with this kind of life


Dear My Guardian Angel / Dear My Broken Failure / I'm so sorry that I made you cry...
It's too late
To try and defy fate
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This poem was written for my project- "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume six: My Letters To No One
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:iconcoeb:
Coeb Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Dont blink?
I'm so confused, what does that even mean? o.o /Scrolled the comments/

...Anyway, the ending of this, so gorgeous<3
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:iconimmortalizedlies:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, it's a quote from a the popular tv show "Dr. Who" and apparently this reminded a lot of the fans of it. :P

And thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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Coeb Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Ah, I....never watched that. Haha. ^^

And it was extremely well written, of course I dont like it! I love it.<3
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TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
First thought: don't blink.
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MixedScales Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, this was a great read. and ware could I find the "The Prodigy's Suicide"?
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ Thank you so much, and "The Prodigy's Suicide" is still in the making. All of the poems located in my gallery will all be in the book. So you can read what is going to be in the book before it's released. I hope that answered your question, feel free to ask anything else.
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gravenimagez Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Professional Artist
:clap:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful.:clap:
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:iconimmortalizedlies:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :D
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome!:D
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DayzeeHead Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i saw the picture and thought, there's going to be don't blink comments. i was right. anyway, nice poem.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, yeah you were right. I didn't even know about what the comments meant for a while until I asked.
And now I'm like "Hurr hurr" :P
Well, thank you for the nice compliment.

*blinks*
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disruptedvice Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Writer
Oh my god. This is beautiful. I literally have tears in my eyes. I'm sorry if you have ever felt like this. Please continue writing, you are amazing!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww *hugs* you don't have to say you're sorry. I don't feel like this anymore, it's just something from my past. And thank you, I will keep on writing. I release one poem a week.
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disruptedvice Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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marymary17 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DON'T BLINK. (saw the picture :P )
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*blinks*
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marymary17 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nooooooo!
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Mecha-Woman Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I saw the picture up top and all I could think was DON'T BLINK!!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
IKR!
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ColorItBlack Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Sorry but my first thought when I saw the picture:

DON'T BLINK!!/shot

Then I read the poem and <3 <3 <3
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, well I guess that was a majority of people's first thoughts....considering the amount of the other "dont blink" comments. :P I'm just glad you read the poem, and enjoyed it. Thank you.
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owlcitylovr1313 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is fabulous...
As long as you don't blink.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hurrrr Lol, I'm like regretting this now XD
Damn angels, and damn tv shows. I'm sorry, it's just I never watched Dr. Who before :P
I....hope....you....liked.....it.....
*breaksdownandcriesandthenrollsawayinthedarkness*
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owlcitylovr1313 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha, i do like it! Sorry, I'm a big Whovian, I just had to. XD
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AsherMarieWeasley Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't blink. Blink and you're dead. Good luck.
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AshenSorrow Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:iconwowplz: Absolutely amazing! :woohoo: now this is a MASTERPIECE!! :faint: You are a fantastic Artist :excited: :clap:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh.
Well, I'm just happy that you were able to enjoy it. <3
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tuncbonumvidebator Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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GoryBlueCat Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, beautifully written! Love every bit of it! ^^
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:iconimmortalizedlies:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, well thank you, that means a lot.
And is that Mew as your avatar? :P
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GoryBlueCat Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Why yes it is! ^u^
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mybluedesertrain Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful... but
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh noez x.x
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mybluedesertrain Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DONT BLINK
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CyberChan Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I would never blink if I had a guardian angel..Don't blink
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:iconimmortalizedlies:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Can I be your guardian angel?!
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KittyCatHat Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
This is really beautiful and well-written
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:iconimmortalizedlies:
ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :) I'm just so glad that you enjoyed it.
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Icefox139 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:icondontblinkplz:
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Trooperella Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:thumbsup:
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lovevigilanti Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DON'T BLINK!!!!
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pumpkinbox Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3 <3 <3!!!
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
<3 <3 <3 <3!
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InterstellarShadow Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow. Just WOW! Your use of juxtaposition, with the good and the bad, is amazing. The surrealist emotion in the piece is just stirring.
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