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Alcohol Fueled Words

Blame can go a long ways
When the problems stay intact
Guilt always refuses to fade
After another hurtful attack

Regret has an unquenchable thirst
While voices are thrown every direction
Rage is tightly bottled up until the next outburst
Though the tears dry, the reasons for them won't be easily forgiven


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You bring out those secret, false words I don't even mean
You push me over the edge, and get rid of my sense of controllability
You expose hidden feelings that are supposed to be locked deep within me

You pull me into a downward spiral, to release my brutality
You choose innocent targets to go for, but you leave their faces blurry
You lock me within a state of mind that consumes all of my untapped fury

You turn me into a monster, so heartlessly
You change morals and intentions too quickly
You win every time; hail to your addictive victories

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Intoxicated emotions are limitless
While they continue to riot away inside
Resistance is rendered useless
When the real colors are unleashed to the outside

My apologies become silent to everyone
It weighs on me, after I've left you feeling so hurt
If I could, I would take back everything that I've done
I'm so sorry, I didn't mean any of those alcohol fueled words
The thirst always wins
Let the downfall of my senses begin
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This poem is written for my project which is titled "The Prodigy's Suicide"
In volume one: A Tragedy In The Making
Alcohol Fueled Words -
Only In My Memories - [link]
No More Therapy - Not Yet Written
Open - Not Yet Written
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:icondelightdreamer:
DelightDreamer Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow this is a very powerful poem. :clap: :clap:
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I tried, so I'm glad people found it powerful. :)
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Dzrtbtrfly15 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
very smooth word flow

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Intoxication is just the nuts to say what you're afraid to sober
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol thanks, and yes, I have heard that many times before.
<3
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CrystalTearz55 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it. :)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
Impressively done. You managed to do very well.
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ImmortalizedLies Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the compliment. :D
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome.
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